Thursday, July 28, 2005
Nambikai
Athai patri nan enna solvathu?,
athai patri sollavatha?, illai
athanal vantha payangallai patri sollavatha?
Athan payangal pala irukindrathu,
Ella muyarchigalayum, vetri pera udhaviyathu
vazhvin ovoru thunbathayum samalikka udhaviyathu
mallai yenna thadangal vantha pothillum
athai asaika udhaviyathu
eppadi pala vishayangalai sollallam
irunthallum athan azhagai patri sollamal irukka mudiyathu
dhidagathramana antha udambin azhagey athu thaney.
yenna yosikirirgal,
ambikayin kanavan nambiyin kai patri than
koorikondirukiraen.
Saw so many people writing poems to narayanan sir's competition.Most of them were serious, thought i will do a light one.This is not for the competition, it is over anyway, this was just for fun.
*Ganesh didn't understand it,before others say anything.let me explain it.I just split the word nambikai as nambi and kai(Nambi's hand).I have described the first 2 para with a common meaning, making the reader understand the poem in terms of Nambikkai and revealing the split word in the last para.ghannu bhai podhumma??
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Good one..
Btw.. I am also one of those who tried at a lighter one.. Dont know whether It turned out "light" enuf
Btw.. I am also one of those who tried at a lighter one.. Dont know whether It turned out "light" enuf
arvind,
ennada kindala? :)
ml,
yenniku ningaludey comments manassilayilla :).
kl,
thanxs
sathya,
thanxs read urs to was funny.
aparna,
Best comment :), u got good wit.
raman,
think u can also write a poem.y dont u try :)
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ennada kindala? :)
ml,
yenniku ningaludey comments manassilayilla :).
kl,
thanxs
sathya,
thanxs read urs to was funny.
aparna,
Best comment :), u got good wit.
raman,
think u can also write a poem.y dont u try :)
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